This is a nice peice of work, but could be so much better with practice and more thought put into the melody! Also working on different strumming patterns would help, becuase it sounds like you are only strumming down on the chords.. keep it up!!
not bad distortion, fairly good melody, but could've used more triplets, hammer-ons, pull offs, palm muting...u know, the works..lol
Nice work overall...for a test run!
I listened to this about a month ago, and for some reason I just recently started humming the melody out of no where! A song that does that is one to take note of, excellent job! I even learned this by ear on the guitar! I can't stop playing it! lol
U like your other version better, and I dont know why you insist on using those drum rolls (it doesnt go along with the song). Yeah so all you need to do is work on the drums and you'll be okay!
yeah...I suck at drums...
And by "U" do you mean you?
'Cuz I don't like my other version better
yeah, thanks again for letting me use your guitar, mic, and software...
It was fun!
Now I just need to find another song to cover...
It sounds like your getting tired as your singing! lolz.
The low voice sounds like its forced a bit, but overall it was really good!
Yeah, the low was forced a bit.
Thanks for the review!
The percussion was much better, but still could be fixed up a bit. I like how it started out more than the first version.
at least on the piano! I did notice a mistake or two, but other than that it was really good!
thanks! And yes, there were a lot more than mistakes. But I had recorded 5 earlier versions of this (all ALMOST the same) and was getting sick of playing this song.
penguinboi is right in saying u should change the name, but actually it was Jerry C who created Canon Rock and not funtwo. For some reason he gets all the credit...
Thanks! it's not letting me edit the video desc. at the moment, so i can't actually change the name or the description...
This is amazing! but maybe you could turn down the volume of the snare in the backround or whatever that is, it got a little distracting
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